Friday, July 11, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday #2: "Confession"


I do miss you though. I'll readily confess that. Maybe more -- probably more -- than I ought to given the "brand-newness of us". But is a heart that's unbreakable even worth having? The very thing that makes... The word about to roll off my fingers would probably scare fuck out of you.

I need a moment.
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My second 55 Flash Fiction Friday attempt comes from... well, that's my secret. I will say that it has no relation whatever to my last 55.
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15 comments:

smarmoofus said...

Take your time. We'll wait.

If you don't start telling G-man that you're writing these, I will. The others need to know.

-smarmoofus

Mojo said...

Oh but isn't it cozy here with just the two of us... the others can wait a while.

Pam said...

well, for being 'it is what it is' it's sure a great one. welcome to the world of 55s. :)

Mojo said...

@ciara: thanks! I figured this would be a good way to work on making a point without talking it to death. Which, if you read some of my posts you can tell, is quite a challenge for me sometimes.

Glad you liked it!

Mona said...

an unbreakable heart is a DEAD heart!

Great 55! so much said in what was left unsaid!

Mojo said...

@Mona: Thanks for the props! And I'd agree with your observation. Never did think much of that line in The Wizard of Oz.

Mojo said...

@Missy: I bet you say that to all the guys, doncha? *wink*

@Mona: Is that you I see in my SiteMeter reports from J&K?

smarmoofus said...

*replies lazy with a murmured* Mmm, cozy yes...--WHAT THE?! *stares at the door bursts open and a parade of people stride in noisily*

(And that, my friends, is how rumours get started.)

-smarmoofus

G-Man said...

MOJO...??
Where have you been?
Awesome 55!!!
Please make this a regular Friday thing....
There sure is a lot of great 55's this week.
Thanks for visiting, and have a GREAT week-end...Galen aka G-Man

Mojo said...

@Gman: I've just discovered the world of 55's recently. Interesting exercise for sure!

Mona said...

Your site meter would reprt me from anywhere ranging from J & K to, Delhi, to Luckhnaw, to Calcutta.:D It show me from there to myself on my site meter; so I know! :D

The net is so screwed up here.

Although I sit near the Taj Mahal from Agra as I write this, It is very rare that your site meter would show me from Agra :D

Mojo said...

@Mona: Yep. You showed up coming from UP this time. Lakhnau -- is that a different spelling for Lucknow? Or is Lucknow some place else?

Mona said...

its the same place, mis-spelled here :)

snowelf said...

Ahem, yes Mojo ditto Smarmy, cause you're like the flippin' best kept secrets in 55's!!
These are AWESOME.

--snow

Mojo said...

@Snow: I'm not really a "secret" -- well kept or otherwise. I just didn't start this until a few weeks ago. Glad you like them though.