Friday, July 11, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday #2: "Confession"


I do miss you though. I'll readily confess that. Maybe more -- probably more -- than I ought to given the "brand-newness of us". But is a heart that's unbreakable even worth having? The very thing that makes... The word about to roll off my fingers would probably scare fuck out of you.

I need a moment.
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My second 55 Flash Fiction Friday attempt comes from... well, that's my secret. I will say that it has no relation whatever to my last 55.
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16 comments:

smarmoofus said...

Take your time. We'll wait.

If you don't start telling G-man that you're writing these, I will. The others need to know.

-smarmoofus

Mojo said...

Oh but isn't it cozy here with just the two of us... the others can wait a while.

ciara said...

well, for being 'it is what it is' it's sure a great one. welcome to the world of 55s. :)

Mojo said...

@ciara: thanks! I figured this would be a good way to work on making a point without talking it to death. Which, if you read some of my posts you can tell, is quite a challenge for me sometimes.

Glad you liked it!

Mona said...

an unbreakable heart is a DEAD heart!

Great 55! so much said in what was left unsaid!

Mojo said...

@Mona: Thanks for the props! And I'd agree with your observation. Never did think much of that line in The Wizard of Oz.

Rebicmel said...

Oh man, come on now tell Missy all about it! I'm all ears. :)

Mojo said...

@Missy: I bet you say that to all the guys, doncha? *wink*

@Mona: Is that you I see in my SiteMeter reports from J&K?

smarmoofus said...

*replies lazy with a murmured* Mmm, cozy yes...--WHAT THE?! *stares at the door bursts open and a parade of people stride in noisily*

(And that, my friends, is how rumours get started.)

-smarmoofus

G-Man said...

MOJO...??
Where have you been?
Awesome 55!!!
Please make this a regular Friday thing....
There sure is a lot of great 55's this week.
Thanks for visiting, and have a GREAT week-end...Galen aka G-Man

Mojo said...

@Gman: I've just discovered the world of 55's recently. Interesting exercise for sure!

Mona said...

Your site meter would reprt me from anywhere ranging from J & K to, Delhi, to Luckhnaw, to Calcutta.:D It show me from there to myself on my site meter; so I know! :D

The net is so screwed up here.

Although I sit near the Taj Mahal from Agra as I write this, It is very rare that your site meter would show me from Agra :D

Mojo said...

@Mona: Yep. You showed up coming from UP this time. Lakhnau -- is that a different spelling for Lucknow? Or is Lucknow some place else?

Mona said...

its the same place, mis-spelled here :)

snowelf said...

Ahem, yes Mojo ditto Smarmy, cause you're like the flippin' best kept secrets in 55's!!
These are AWESOME.

--snow

Mojo said...

@Snow: I'm not really a "secret" -- well kept or otherwise. I just didn't start this until a few weeks ago. Glad you like them though.