Thursday, November 26, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday #54: "What Was Your Name Again?"


Gasp! Did he actually write a 55 this week? Why yes, I believe he did.
"You're the trifecta."
"I'm the what?"
"The trifecta. I dig smart chicks. I dig smart ass chicks. I dig smart chicks with great…"
"Don't."
"So, see? The trifecta."
"And I'm supposed to be flattered I suppose."
"Naturally."
Shaking her head, she turned back to the laundry basket in front of her.

But she was smiling.


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16 comments:

Brian Miller said...

you know she loved it! haha. wonderful 55. i just may have to use those lines on T. smiles.

mine is up!

Chef Kar said...

I love it ~ sure hope I'll be a trifecta for some lucky ... well, some day ~ maybe. Well done. Loved it.

Mine is up:

Friday Flash 55 ~ Memoirs

G-Man said...

Well Well Well......
The Prodigal Son Returns..
Most Excellent 55 MOJO!!
Thanks for this whimsical return to the fold.
Have a 5 on 3 Week-End....G

Felicitas said...

Of course she was! Great 55!

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Janna said...

LOL! I love how she interrupts him with "Don't". :)

I've never been a trifecta, but at least I can dream.

On a good day, I'm 2 out of 3.

My own Friday 55 is right HERE.
Come see!

Shadow said...

i'm smiling too, this is GREAT!

Roxy said...

Darn, I want to be a trifecta... LOL! I'm smiling, giggling as a matter of fact :p Great 55!!!

Hootin' Anni said...

It sounds like something for which I'd need to take some over the counter -to counteract this symptom....trifecta.

Excellent.
I'm smiling too.

My 55 is "Going Cold Turkey"...skim down below my Show n Tell post to find it. Click Here

Susan at Stony River said...

I love it! It seemed like a pickup line to me at first, which made the end just wonderful. Great little story!

otin said...

Shit, I never even hit the daily double! LMAO!

Mama Zen said...

Mama Zen.

Hee hee!

Monkey Man said...

Funny stuff. This week my 55 is WAR!

Pouty Lips said...

What a great flash 55!

smarmoofus said...

Leave 'em smiling. Way to go, Mojo. Fact or fiction?

-smarmoofus