Two pairs of grey-green eyes locked. Two pulses quickened. Two pounding hearts pumped a thunderous rush of blood that muted the din of the revelry around them. "Well?" she wondered as the final seconds of the year ticked away, "Does he need an invitation?"."Happy New Year.", he smiled."Shut up and kiss me."
"It's not courage if you're not terrified." - D. Blagdan
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." - Nietzsche
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Thursday, December 31, 2009
55 Flash Fiction Friday #59: The Invitation
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That's my kind of girl!
ReplyDeleteBoy oh Boy!!
ReplyDeleteLove is in the air today!
Excellent 55 Mojo.
I'd like to personally thank you for being such a fine contributor and supporter this past year.
Have a Kick Ass New Year....G
going to be grabbing me a few of those. nice 55. hope you have a great new year!
ReplyDeletemy 55 is up!
Shut up and kiss me.
ReplyDeleteCool final line. Tells a whole story in five words. Come visit mine early Friday morning.
Sometimes, a girl has just got to say it!
ReplyDeletetoo cool. made me smile. mines' up. Sarah Hey and Happy New Year.
ReplyDeletePerfect for the holiday. Great 55
ReplyDeleteI have been there. Great 55! Happy New Year :)
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