Friday, July 18, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday #3: "Concurrence"

Sometimes the lines get blurred between stories. That's why the truth is so much easier.

"If what you want, or what you need, is promises in the dark", he said, "I'm not your guy."
"No", she smiled, "not promises. Just something solid I can get a grip on that won't dissolve as soon as I touch it."
Pulling her to him he murmured into her hair, "Is this solid enough?"


Note: This is related to last week's 55, even if the relation is perhaps a bit oblique.

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13 comments:

Kaknu said...

Rawr! Romance novel anyone? hehehe - great 55!

Rebicmel said...

Ah sexy sexy!!! Now that is something to cuddle up to in the late night hours.

Have a great weekend.

ciara said...

wowee! i was thinking what kaknu said lol great 55 :) mine is up, too.

smarmoofus said...

*giggles at Kaknu* You said "rawr"! Did I teach you that, oh wife o' mine?

Indeed, this is a hot 55. Très chaud, as g-man would say.

-smarmoofus

Mojo said...

Hot? Really?? Or are you guys teasing me for my romance-novelesque tendencies... (oh go ahead... I can take it.)

And I knew I'd heard that "Rawr" somewhere before!

Kaknu said...

hahaha You caught me! That Rawr was a smarmoofus-ism.

SignGurl said...

*sigh* I love a good romantic story!

Great job!

Mona said...

I like the pun on the word Solid. Solid as stable, concrete, real...

Then again, I like the imagery, which gives a passionate content to the form.

Its so Mojo a 55ve :D

( I had no idea about what Mojo meant until a Mr. Knowitall told me...)

Mojo said...

@Signgurl: Glad you enjoyed it. tune in next week when we hear "her" say...

@Mona: Actually there are several definitions of the word Mojo, but I guess several (maybe all) of them might apply here.

KJ said...

Love it.

Have a great weekend

Charlene said...

hmmm~~~~are you trying to `tell us something here???~~have a good one

G-Man said...

Very nicely done Mojo...
Such a romantic!!!
Almost a lost art...
Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End!!...G

Cravey said...

Me OW!