Friday, July 18, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday #3: "Concurrence"


"If what you want, or what you need, is promises in the dark", he said, "I'm not your guy."
"No", she smiled, "not promises. Just something solid I can get a grip on that won't dissolve as soon as I touch it."
Pulling her to him he murmured into her hair, "Is this solid enough?"
M6Friday: 55FlashFiction Graciously hosted by G-Man.
Note: Sometimes the lines get blurred between stories. That's why the truth is so much easier.
This is related to last week's 55, even if the relation is perhaps a bit oblique.
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13 comments:

Kaknu said...

Rawr! Romance novel anyone? hehehe - great 55!

Rebicmel said...

Ah sexy sexy!!! Now that is something to cuddle up to in the late night hours.

Have a great weekend.

ciara said...

wowee! i was thinking what kaknu said lol great 55 :) mine is up, too.

smarmoofus said...

*giggles at Kaknu* You said "rawr"! Did I teach you that, oh wife o' mine?

Indeed, this is a hot 55. Très chaud, as g-man would say.

-smarmoofus

Mojo said...

Hot? Really?? Or are you guys teasing me for my romance-novelesque tendencies... (oh go ahead... I can take it.)

And I knew I'd heard that "Rawr" somewhere before!

Kaknu said...

hahaha You caught me! That Rawr was a smarmoofus-ism.

SignGurl said...

*sigh* I love a good romantic story!

Great job!

Mona said...

I like the pun on the word Solid. Solid as stable, concrete, real...

Then again, I like the imagery, which gives a passionate content to the form.

Its so Mojo a 55ve :D

( I had no idea about what Mojo meant until a Mr. Knowitall told me...)

Mojo said...

@Signgurl: Glad you enjoyed it. tune in next week when we hear "her" say...

@Mona: Actually there are several definitions of the word Mojo, but I guess several (maybe all) of them might apply here.

KJ said...

Love it.

Have a great weekend

Charlene said...

hmmm~~~~are you trying to `tell us something here???~~have a good one

G-Man said...

Very nicely done Mojo...
Such a romantic!!!
Almost a lost art...
Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End!!...G

Cravey said...

Me OW!