Blue light reflected off the ceiling as the phone buzzed angrily on the nightstand. He flipped the annoyed device open and thumbed the buttons that would take him to the inbox where she waited. Through the haze of half-wakefulness he smiled as he read. How the hell did she always know just what to say?
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Great 55!
Mmmm, those kind of messeges are the nicest ones ;)
That was awesome Mojo! Isn't it funny how even though we are woken up and annoyed that a call from someone we want to hear cancels out anger.
I'm up too
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Hey, that was pretty cool! Nice 55!
nice. love those kinda messages. nice 55.
mine is up!
Mojo...?
You sly ole dog...hehehehe
Excellent 55 my friend.
Your right on the money with these as of late Son, Loved it!!
Thanks for this perfect contribution, and have a Kick Ass Week-End.
(You were right, they couldn't stay out of the P-Box)
I have an even better story, but I would never tell it publicly. But... *grin*... yay for hearing the right words from the right person, whatever time of day (or night).
Smile on.
-smarmoofus
This is well done! I especially like the part about blue light reflecting off the ceiling. Very descriptive, and it helped to set the scene perfectly.
Nice 55!
Mine is ready too,right here. :)
How is it the phone wraps the right words in the wrong sound?
I love the "blue light special" in my life. And I really enjoyed this piece.
You really captured the moment in only 55 words. Loved it.
Mine is up.
She sounds like a keeper! With my luck she would have dialed a wrong number LOL but I'm glad they had a happy ending.
My 55 is up too, right here.
Connections. Great description. Great 55. My 55 is here.
great 55!!
Very good 55. I enjoyed.
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