Thursday, October 02, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday (#14): Chapter 7 - Vah Khallas Hai


(Don't worry, you didn't miss anything. We now resume our regularly scheduled program at the point it was interrupted.)
Some stories are the same in any language.
The night breeze carried their surprised cackles at the gift she had left them through the open window. If she looked, she believed she could see the delight in their yellow eyes as they feasted on the hulk that had been Vinay. The hyenas would dispose of the evidence, and no one would look twice.

Notes:
vah khallas hai: that is finished, that is done


Previous Chapters
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi

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10 comments:

smarmoofus said...

Filler! Funny... you meant filler for the hyenas. Nice job!

On another note, thank you for joining my Blog Party. I had a lot of fun tonight. *grin*
Happy 55!
-smarmoofus

G-Man said...

I need hyena's sometimes...hehehe
Great Job Mojo..I hope you had some political fun tonight.
Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End....G

Akelamalu said...

Ooooh I'm scared! Great imagery there!

SignGurl said...

Wicked! I like it.

Pam said...

wow, great installment, mojo. i'm up now.

btw how are you feeling about all the internet articles in regards to who won the debate last night? lol :P~~

Daryl said...

I hope she tossed the hyenas some vino to wash down Vinay


:-Daryl

Mona said...

LOL @ Daryl :D

yes, in that particular part of India, Hyenas would sure love to feast upon one of their own ( albiet figuratively so)

She is a clever girl, knows how to dispose evidence well indeed!!

Mimi Lenox said...

55 Flash is a difficult genre in the blogosphere. Well done. Hyenas and all...

Thank you for displaying the BlogBlast banner and encouraging people to join the peace train. I am so encouraged by the new bloggers who've decided to take part. But a word of warning: Once you start you can't stop. It's highly addictive.

Words are powerful. And this matters.

snowelf said...

Go hyenas! :)

That's all I got.

--snow

KB said...

I'm afraid. Nice job.