Friday, November 07, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday #19: Chapter 12 - Yaadein (III)


Some stories are the same in any language.
Before very long, the mere sight of her was not enough. His hands became familiar with her. Casually at first. Then came the time he found her alone in the stables. His grip on her like steel, his lips and teeth tinged with paan. His mouth covering hers in lust. She shuddered at the memory.

Notes:
yaadein: Memories
paan: The leaf of the betel plant chewed for its mild intoxicating effects. Chewing paan stains the inside of the mouth reddish orange.
Previous Chapters
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
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4 comments:

ciara said...

wow...this one i can envision. it's making me shudder. good installment, mojo.

i'm up.

Mona said...

Yikes! How could she let some paan chewing moron kiss her!!!

HORROR!

Daryl said...

YUCK .. he left reddish orange slime on her?

:-Daryl

G-Man said...

Sorry Mojo..Your link on my post took me to Chapter 18..
I had to do a little searchin...
But here I am..
Almost an R rating here son..hehehe
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