Some stories are the same in any language.
It became a routine. Not on any schedule, but she knew he would come. Stinking of British liquor, grunting and slobbering like an animal. The rest avoided her, afraid his eye would settle on one of them. This was perhaps the gravest injustice of all, for it was for them that she bore these trials.
Notes:
akelee: alone (f.)
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
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11 comments:
brilliant!
he's a bastard...great installment, mojo. right now i'm so brain dead i have NOTHING. i'm so tired that my brain decided to say 'sayonara' for awhile lol
this is perhaps the most poignant & Ironic episode of the story uptil now!
I remember that!
Is it stinkin GIN? Because I love sinking GIN...:D Nice 55 work...although I'll have to go back to the beginning and play catch up!
I LOVE British Gin...
Thanks for visiting and always offering such quality work week after week Mojo..Have a Great Week-End...G
This sounds like a scene from my night last night. Hehe!
Nicely done!
The image that your bring with your words is frightening. Very powerful.
Hides in the alley and waits. Late at night, she sneaks over and beats the crap out of the Brit Liquour Breath Drunkard, beats him to a bloody pulp, then gives the evil eye to all of those other bastards that lie there and watch, and I say to them, "if you touch her, you are next."
They all bow their heads.
Dont fuck with Kali.
;)
:)
(I wonder if that's 55 words?)
I'm really impressed. Sensitive work, lot of emotion, but not mushy. I can visualize this as I'm reading and I can't wait to turn the page.
Eaton. :)
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