Friday, December 05, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday #23: Chapter 16 - Nishaan


Some stories are the same in any language.
"I will teach you not to act pricey with me!", he'd bellowed the one time she'd refused to accede to his assault, "You are mine! You will not forget again!" She could still smell the acrid smoke as the iron brand seared the inside of her thigh. And he was right. She did not forget.

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nishaan: mark, imprint
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4 comments:

G-Man said...

Dang Mojo...
Quite vivid in description, but I doubt if Gloria Steinem would like this..
Thanks for playing though, and have a Great Week-End...G

Mona said...

Is that Gloria still alive?

Gosh! he makes her a 'branded slave'! That is so cruel. Like a 'thing' to be owned..Huh!

Rastaman said...

Definitely a nasty man.

Lulda Casadaga said...

OOOuuuIIIeee....that hurts you bastard! I hope she gets revenge!