Some stories are the same in any language.
Nearly two years she had borne the indignities, the pain, keeping silent thinking she could spare others these abominations. Sarika's rape had changed all that. The tight slap across his face startled. But in a split-second his confusion turned to blind, seething rage. And in that moment began the last mistake he would ever make.
Notes:
dard: pain
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
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8 comments:
Coming along nicely Mojo....
If I've never told you this before.
You Are A Great Writer!!!
Thanks for doing all that you do to help me out on Friday, I really appreciate it and you.
Have a Great Week-End...Galen
aaaah, part of.... gotta read the rest, or should i say, previous ones. off i go......
Aah....That is amazing. That story is telling itself beyond these 55 words. Amazing.
Why !@ !@#$%^ rouge, he can't lay his hands off the poor other girls either..the Swine !!
Oh, yeah. The last mistake. He,he,he,he.....
damn right it's the last mistake he'll ever make! great installment, mojo. i'm way behind on the 55s. i plan to put up one of my crappy poems later today in lieu. haha
Vivid imagery in 55 words - excellent!
Your story is enlightening, moving
and I could not stop reading. Really looking forward to the next 55. :)
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