Friday, January 09, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday #27: Chapter 19 - Dard


Some stories are the same in any language.
Nearly two years she had borne the indignities, the pain, keeping silent thinking she could spare others these abominations. Sarika's rape had changed all that. The tight slap across his face startled. But in a split-second his confusion turned to blind, seething rage. And in that moment began the last mistake he would ever make.

Notes:
dard: pain
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8 comments:

G-Man said...

Coming along nicely Mojo....
If I've never told you this before.
You Are A Great Writer!!!
Thanks for doing all that you do to help me out on Friday, I really appreciate it and you.
Have a Great Week-End...Galen

Shadow said...

aaaah, part of.... gotta read the rest, or should i say, previous ones. off i go......

SandyCarlson said...

Aah....That is amazing. That story is telling itself beyond these 55 words. Amazing.

Mona said...

Why !@ !@#$%^ rouge, he can't lay his hands off the poor other girls either..the Swine !!

Patty said...

Oh, yeah. The last mistake. He,he,he,he.....

ciara said...

damn right it's the last mistake he'll ever make! great installment, mojo. i'm way behind on the 55s. i plan to put up one of my crappy poems later today in lieu. haha

Akelamalu said...

Vivid imagery in 55 words - excellent!

Eaton Bennett said...

Your story is enlightening, moving
and I could not stop reading. Really looking forward to the next 55. :)