Friday, January 30, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday #30: Chapter 22 - Andheraa



Some stories are the same in any language.
She woke in the darkness to the sound of cheering, of crackers bursting or perhaps rifles fired into the air. How long she had lain there senseless she didn't know. Nor would she have time to figure, because at that moment the door cracked open revealing the silhouette she knew too well. Vinay had come.

Notes:
andheraa: darkness
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9 comments:

stan said...

I teach my kids to write creatively to engage their readers. I like this.

Donnetta Lee said...

Sounds ominous and intriguing, Mojo. Trust that all is well in your world. D

Mona said...

The ominous shadow looms large...the darkness is very symbolic and prophetic of what is to come...

g-man said...

Lots of impending tension here Mojo, good job!
Once again your weekly contributions are very much appreciated. Thanks for visiting and commenting, and have a Great Week-End...G

Shadow said...

building, building, building.... nice!

Akelamalu said...

Out of the darkness........ ooooerrr!

Mine's up too.

paisley said...

delightfully dark.....

Lulda Casadaga said...

Oh oh..should I be scared? I will hold my breath...;)

Lucy said...

spooky! even tho i don't know who or what vinay is!