Some stories are the same in any language.
She had considered staying, considered hunting down the others and delivering them to their maker as she had Vinay. But she had no way to know who they were, and no one was going to aid her in finding out. She was tarnished now, damaged, and for all practical purposes dead to all but herself.
Notes:
golaa pooraa huaa hai: the circle is complete
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
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11 comments:
this is sad...
Awww poor baby...
I'm sure she'll bounce back!
Thanks for visiting and playing so well Mojo. Have a Great Week-End!
Did you hear about the Irani woman who got her face burned, blinded by acid by a guy who wanted to marry her and she said no to him?
He is going to be blinded by acid by law too in few weeks but he will be unconscious while they pour acid in his eyes!! She didn't have that luxury when he threw acid on her. I guess in a way her gola is complete too. Only in Iran!
Anyway, we have Shiva Ratri on Monday, will be cooking yet another vegetarian thali. My kids are not very happy, they are really tired veg platter now! :D
Oh well..can't help it, can't cook meat on festivals, may be later in the week, I will please them!
Have a great weekend.
that last line feels like I have been hit... it is so powerful...dead to all but herself...
Asha writes about the Irani woman... Here close by in Delhi we had a boyfriend sending MMS of her doing a striptease for him, when the girl refused to marry him, yesterday!
To all her classmates and his friends
Find the strenth! :/
What a story start - or a startling story!
HIS MARK IS WORSE THAN HIS BARK
Amazing how drawn in you can be in just 55 words.
i agree w mona...the last line is powerful
great job, mojo
This 55 made me feel really sick for her, got right to my emotions.
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