Friday, January 23, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday #29: Chapter 21 - Apmaan



Some stories are the same in any language.
Vinay rubbed the stinging, reddened imprint her hand had left and decided she must learn some respect. It did not befit the Zamindar's only son to be insulted by a woman in this way. She would learn her place, and she would learn it today itself. Independence would be celebrated in fine fashion this night.

Notes:
apmaan: insult
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8 comments:

Shadow said...

damn...

G-Man said...

Mojo....?
Not quite as bad as you eluded to.
Excellent job once again..
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Terrfific Week-End...G

snowelf said...

ouch.

--snow

paisley said...

you take this 55 thing seriously don't you... i have to look thru the links so i can read the whole story......

Lulda Casadaga said...

ouch...:)

Akelamalu said...

Viany is not a happy chappy is he? She could be in trouble here! :0

Mona said...

Whoa! what next!?

ciara said...

yikes! i remember the time i left a mark on the one and only boyfriend that every hit me.