Some stories are the same in any language.
She turned eastward, determined her eyes would never again fall on this festering dung heap. As she passed the edge of the village, her sari grazed the ground, picking up a last trace of dust*. When night fell and she had put miles behind her, she scrubbed herself raw and reduced the sari to ash.*Nod to Tiff... thanks for the visual babe.
Notes:
nikalnaa: to emerge
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
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11 comments:
Excellent! Bless her determined spirit and love the last words, "she reduced her Sari to ash". :)
And taking nothing with her but bad memories....,
Excellent 55 Mojo.
Here's hoping that you have a Wonderful Week-End....G
at last.....
Man this stuff is intense and very well written...
Whew~ I think Ive missed something. Got some catching up to do here.
Have a great weekend, Mojo
Free at last!
This is becoming my favorite soap opera. Always intense.
I'm glad she has put this chapter behind her.
great installment...w the sari being burned to ash, she is free.
Very, very good, Mojo. I can "see" this one. D
Nice 55. I didn't do one this week. I like yours.
Hi - found you from Mr. Know-it-all... I like your writing style, so intense.
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