Some stories are the same in any language.
With a clash of gears the lorry lurched ahead, rocking the occupants backward, then forward again. Arjun cast a sideways scowl at the driver, then asked "Do you have family in Amritsar?"
"Not Amritsar or anywhere." she replied, "There are none left."
Arjun smiled grimly and mused, "In my family I am the dead one."
Notes:
Rishtedaar: Relations, family
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 26: Nikalnaa
Chapter 27: Raastaa
Chapter 28: Pahraa
Chapter 29: Chetaavnee
Chapter 30: Amritsar
Chapter 31: Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Chapter 32: Anaamika
Chapter 33: Arjun
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 26: Nikalnaa
Chapter 27: Raastaa
Chapter 28: Pahraa
Chapter 29: Chetaavnee
Chapter 30: Amritsar
Chapter 31: Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Chapter 32: Anaamika
Chapter 33: Arjun
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12 comments:
Love your photos and the flash fiction: Riveting!
Great last line in the Flash. Just found G-Man and had a go myself.
You continue to have suspense in your 55!!!
Mine is posted today [scroll below my Friday's Show n Tell] ---it's entitled "_ _ _ _ _ becomes you". Have a great weekend.
So the story goes on and I am more intrigued. Great flash 55,
My 55 is ready for today.
Now this is getting scarey. He could be a ghost. We don't like ghosts. You can't eat them.
Our 55 is ready.
Ahhh...
The Black Sheep of the family eh?
hehehehe
Thanks Mojo for this always well written story, and for your great support of the Friday Fun...
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G
Wow. That's got some punch.
oooo... Mojo
...I really like how you shaped this one. Very nice!
--snow
I feel a connection coming on! Could be he is gonna be good for her and her for him...:))
oooh, the last line is the best...
I like what I've seen of Arjun so far. I've got a good feeling about him, I think he'll turn out to be one of the good guys.
O! so he is the black sheep! So sad! he seems really like a nice person!
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