Some stories are the same in any language.
In his surprise Arjun didn't realize that he'd lifted his foot from the throttle slowing the lorry. One enraged gang member charged leaping at the passenger side running board. A fraction of a second later, he fell to the ground, the rifle butt having turned his nose into a sodden, pulpy mass. "Drive!", Anaamika demanded.
Notes:
chalo!: move! (or, in this case, drive!)
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 26: Nikalnaa
Chapter 27: Raastaa
Chapter 28: Pahraa
Chapter 29: Chetaavnee
Chapter 30: Amritsar
Chapter 31: Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Chapter 32: Anaamika
Chapter 33: Arjun
Chapter 34: Rishtedaar
Chapter 35: Mein Usko Maraa Hua
Chapter 36: Samajh
Chapter 37: Shabaash!
Chapter 38: Muskarati
Chapter 39: Gheraao
Chapter 40: Zindagee aur Maut
Chapter 41: Bandooq
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 26: Nikalnaa
Chapter 27: Raastaa
Chapter 28: Pahraa
Chapter 29: Chetaavnee
Chapter 30: Amritsar
Chapter 31: Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Chapter 32: Anaamika
Chapter 33: Arjun
Chapter 34: Rishtedaar
Chapter 35: Mein Usko Maraa Hua
Chapter 36: Samajh
Chapter 37: Shabaash!
Chapter 38: Muskarati
Chapter 39: Gheraao
Chapter 40: Zindagee aur Maut
Chapter 41: Bandooq
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12 comments:
Very good, is it be continued?
survival instinct!
Every week you pack so very much into 55 words. You are a word magician.
Whoa - that is a ton of stuff in 55!
i love this 55, it is like an action movie, what's next!!
What a story start!
Here's my Flash-55:
PLAYING HOUSE – THE FATHER OF THE BRIDE
Niiiiiiice! You paint a great picture with just 55 words!
My first attempt is up!
Poor Arjun! I'd be afraid to drive, with such a fierce passenger! LOL Seriously, I hope that's the last of the bandits and they have a clear road ahead? (I'm afraid to look...)
You're making my Fridays exciting you know.
Wow! Turned his nose into a bloody pulp. She is one strong lady and forceful.
We dragons like your story.
I love it a total adrenaline rush in 55 words great job. My 55 is up. Have a wonderful weekend.
She's now the take charge type?
I had a few spare moments this afternoon, and my motel has access, and you are always first, so you deserve a G-man visit!!
I see the minions are visiting as directed...hehehehe
Have a Great Week-End Mojo.....G
that girl is ballsy! Lol!
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