Thursday, July 09, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday #51: Chapter 45 - Garbar


Some stories are the same in any language.
Rubbing his chin, Arjun wondered how she had lived in India the last two years not knowing about the Partition. With all of the upheaval and violence that had sprung up around it, surely there could be no corner that the news had not reached.
"Where have you been the last two years?"
"In Hell."

Notes:
garbar: confusion
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8 comments:

Mimi Lenox said...

Ahh...the plot thickens. I love the way you keep this story ongoing.

I also came to say...
I'd like to invite you to play The Queen's Meme every Tuesday with Mimi Queen of Memes.
The fun begins next week on July 14, 2009.
The Queen's Meme

I hope you will join us!
Mimi Lenox

G-Man said...

By Hell you mean Detroit?

Thanks for being so patient this evening Mojo, I knew you were chomping at the bit...

Thanks for waiting, thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and Have a Great Week-End...G

CJ said...

This is such an intriguing snippet of your ongoing story.

Mona said...

gosh! that is some answer!

Why don't you take part in the Jason Evan's short story contest!You write so well!

Shadow said...

damn good!

Fandango said...

We dragons don't like partitions.
They just cause problems.
You humans are so weird.

Good writing as usual.

Vita Stunder said...

You are a damn good writer!!

Jadey said...

The story just keeps getting better Mojo. Have a great weekend and my 55 is up