Some stories are the same in any language.
As she told the story, she was surprised at how easily it spilled from her. She told it without tears, without anger. Arjun listened, in shocked silence as she related the horrors of her life, to stunned to interrupt. Only the occasional smack of skin that left another mosquito a red-black smear punctuated her tale.
Notes:
kahaanee: story
Previously
Chapter 1: Vandhe Mataram!
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 2: Aag Lagi
Chapter 3: Aur Nahin
Chapter 4: Bannaa
Chapter 5: Inteqam
Chapter 6: Azaadi
Chapter 7: Vah Khallas Hai
Chapter 8: Ek Nai Shuruat
Chapter 9: Do Sal Paheli
Chapter 10: Yaadein (I)
Chapter 11: Yaadein (II)
Chapter 12: Yaadein (III)
Chapter 13: Paheli Baar
Chapter 14: Akelee
Chapter 15: Pinjraa
Chapter 16: Nishaan
Chapter 17: Qismat
Chapter 18: Nafrat
Chapter 19: Dard
Chapter 20: Mutthee
Chapter 21: Apmaan
Chapter 22: Andheraa
Chapter 23: Indhan
Chapter 24: Das phere
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 26: Nikalnaa
Chapter 27: Raastaa
Chapter 28: Pahraa
Chapter 29: Chetaavnee
Chapter 30: Amritsar
Chapter 31: Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Chapter 32: Anaamika
Chapter 33: Arjun
Chapter 34: Rishtedaar
Chapter 35: Mein Usko Maraa Hua
Chapter 36: Samajh
Chapter 37: Shabaash!
Chapter 38: Muskarati
Chapter 39: Gheraao
Chapter 40: Zindagee aur Maut
Chapter 41: Bandooq
Chapter 42: Chalo!
Chapter 43: Khoj
Chapter 44: Kinaara
Chapter 45: Kahaanee
Chapter 25: Golaa pooraa huaa
Chapter 26: Nikalnaa
Chapter 27: Raastaa
Chapter 28: Pahraa
Chapter 29: Chetaavnee
Chapter 30: Amritsar
Chapter 31: Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Chapter 32: Anaamika
Chapter 33: Arjun
Chapter 34: Rishtedaar
Chapter 35: Mein Usko Maraa Hua
Chapter 36: Samajh
Chapter 37: Shabaash!
Chapter 38: Muskarati
Chapter 39: Gheraao
Chapter 40: Zindagee aur Maut
Chapter 41: Bandooq
Chapter 42: Chalo!
Chapter 43: Khoj
Chapter 44: Kinaara
Chapter 45: Kahaanee
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9 comments:
This was a well written piece Mojo.
Excellent 55, and Excellent imagery!
I'll have to check out your 'other' link some other time...
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Great Week-End.
wow, these never fail to amaze me. great job on the flash fiction. i've been kinda crappy on the flash fiction front, but i'm trying to get better :)
You are such a good writer. I liked the image of smashed mosquito. Just hope PETA doesn't get after you.
sharing is cleansing. good piece.
Dragons know people can be cruel.
Good story telling.
Our 55 is posted.
O Dear. You had to remind me of mosquitoes just few days before I leave for India!
Wow, she's telling him, really telling him...good stuff Mojo. :))
The story is going along so well. I hate to think of what she is telling him.
Great 55
Another great installment...sorry haven't been by in awhile...crazy, lazy summer days. :)
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